DJPureSuffer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[When I'm With You (NG Version)]

solid

This is a very very solid 10. nothing wrong with it, well mastered, good job.

customstuff responds:

Wow, thank you. This really means a lot considering mastering is my weak point! Thank you so much! :)

[[Happy Hardcore]Untitled (WIP)]

Totally

Branch off into EPIC-MODE

StompySan responds:

Why thank you my friend!

[SuperMario64 Menu (lol Type)]

Hey you know what?

Is this fancy? no. Does it have a high quality mastering job? no. Does it have alot of variation? no. But does a good little tune have to have lots of variation, a good mastering job and be fancy? hellz no. This song is short, simple, and just like the original, just plain awesome. You got nothing wrong with this as far as I can see :) good job!

~DJPureSuffer

P.S. I made a few SM64 mixes including a file select mix. check it out if you're bored http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/286664

davidx955 responds:

thanks dude
I'll defiantly check out your stuff
~(^-^)~

[Super Mario 64 Dire Dire Dock]

Pretty cool bro

Alright. Im gonna try to give as much constructive criticism as i can. First, as mentioned before, the flowing high hats get repetitive after a while. Try to listen to some breakbeat style music to get a feel for some nice fast paced drum loops/progressions. For the instruments, it sounds like you were trying to fit the original instruments as best as you could, which makes for a good replica, but maybe you should throw some other instruments at it to give it a even more personalized feel. Also, one of the major features of the original song was the heavy use of reeverb. In your version, your instruments all feel like they sound sharp ( not pitch wise, just how quickly they cut off ). I think that this detracts from the feel of the song. Also, it ends very abruptly without any hinting to it. It makes more of a better loop as it is right now.

Now for rating.

Uniqueness: 6 / 10
Honestly, it sounds like you could have taken a midi file of the original, threw some high hats into it, and tuned up the tempo. but thats not a bad thing, even if its not the case.

Beats: 4 / 10
Very repetative and consisting of a high hat, snare, and a very treble high kick drum.

Mastering Quality: 9 / 10
Nothing is clipping which is a very good thing. every thing is pretty much the same volume except the strings. Try to balance out what instruments you should hear more at what parts. Nice job though.

Flow: 10 / 10
Flows just as well as the original did. however, i would like to see a better ending XD

Analysis: 6 / 10
Overall in this song, I keep thinking to myself how treble high it is. Find a nice deep bass instrument to keep your rib cage pumping to the music. and also, find a good punchy bass drum and turn the volume up. thats the best way to have your fast-pace-ness stand out. So, more bass!!!

Overall: 35 / 50
8 / 10
5 / 5

Not a bad job by ANY means. However, I feel that you have plenty of room to work with and have a lot of room for improvement. So, please feel free to take any of my advice, but also, feel free to ignore it just the same. Because, in the end, all of this is just one opinion.

P.S. Congrats! you have earned the longest review that I have ever given!

-DJPureSuffer

mariogamer2010 responds:

Thanks for awesome information!
I will try too take this into effect.

Anyway thanks for all this time and effort you put into the review! You win a hunk of rewards

You earn:
4 free requests for songs by me (SM64 AND PAPER MARIO FOR THE N64!!!)
Longest review reward on mario gamer type (LRR BY MG2010) You deserve it forever!
Most positive review award (MPR BY MG2010) Again you deserve it forever!
Most honest review award (MHR BY MG2010)

[Paper Mario Fast Battle Remix]

Okay

This isnt horrible. It actually might sound pretty good. but i cannot get past the horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible mastering job. There's notes clipping constantly XD at least throw a limiter or a compressor here and there! If you can make it bearable to listen to, then I might be able actually enjoy the music you are putting forth. Please fix this up, because it isnt bad! :D

mariogamer2010 responds:

Well i find this this review helpful! I'll be sure to give you a better tune next time

[The Progressive NG CUT]

Coolz

Its a nice well constructed tune. Very slightly bland though. try squeezing in a little more harmony variation. but overall, i like it alot :D

check out some of my stuff if you get the time :D

DJ-xTc responds:

Its a cut so expect that i guess,
I noticed there are also a few sounds (reverb, delay) that are difficult to hear since its at a low quality.

~xTc~

[(WF1) F-777- Phantom (Fin]

FINALLY!

you have no idea. ive been waiting for this finished version to come out for soooo long! I LOVE YOU GUYS!

wyldfyre1 responds:

well its out and done =) now we can move on to the next project.

[Dj-C -FireFlies RemiX]

...I came everywhere...

I'm very very happy that you PM'd me with this finished version. I cant think of anything else to say other than that. so yeah... im gonna go change my pants now. thanks :D

Chimy727 responds:

LOL at first i didnt know what you meant!
:D
awesome!
glad you liked it!
thanks!
-chimy727

[Dj-C -Fireflies RemiX (Demo)]

You know, its really hard...

...for me to give this song a ten. just because I despise the actual song. but god dam, you managed to make this song not only bearable for me to listen to, but you managed to have me enjoy this song thoroughly. I really like what you did with this... like... I almost creamed myself from the piano w/ the delay... and the rest kept up with that feeling. only problem with this that I have is that I don't like how you ended it. It just didn't fit in my opinion. But, all and all, Well earned 10/10 and a hard one to earn at that!

~DJPureSuffer

Chimy727 responds:

ROFL thats a funny review! thanks for it too!
lol and thats good to know!
and yeah its wip and a demo.
so it will be better and longer!
thanks!
:D
-chimy727
check out some mah other work!

[Sonic Spinball - Toxic Rave]

Damn

Ya know, I'm not familiar with the original track, but I know what I like. and I like what I hear! Everything blends very well and I like how well the piece progresses along the way, know what I mean? like, its not linear, it has depth, breaks, bridges, the works. Nice job!

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

That's how a real song is in my view. I'm glad you share my vision. Thank you so much for the review ^.^