DJPureSuffer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Keep on Rolling]

Damn man.

You have no idea how rare it is to find good vocals in the hip-hop genre. And quite frankly, it's sick as hell. you keep pumpin out stuff like this and you'll go far dude.

glitchs2d responds:

Haha thanks man

[Rainy Day]

Damn man.

Your skill has grown exponentially since the last time i reviewed one of your songs! I no longer feel that I am in the position to be giving you feedback by any means. Awesome job :) you got this down.

[Synthetica (Hard Trance)]

To the review below me

Little did you know that he was right! haha. You got some seriously sick quality here! fucking everything is awesome. Its awesomely mastered, each part flows beautifully into the next. awesome job!

Needless to say, fav'd, 5'd and now, 10'd.

Check out some of my stuff if you get bored XD

Bahdshah responds:

alright man!!! aahaha it wasnt awesomely mastered! its waaay overcompressed but THANKS SO MUCH MAN!! <3

[Reasoner - Harper's Hop]

Reasoner

You cease to provide quality music. Thats a very hard thing to accomplish and yet you seem to do it so easily. Bravo, your music needs no criticism.

check out my song if you're bored XD http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/365389

[When I'm With You (NG Version)]

solid

This is a very very solid 10. nothing wrong with it, well mastered, good job.

customstuff responds:

Wow, thank you. This really means a lot considering mastering is my weak point! Thank you so much! :)

[Pokémon R/B/Y: Pokémon Tower]

Hey,

You know what, not many people try to remix this song... like... almost nobody does... The only thing is, It doesnt seem like you remixed it at all. However, you did do a good job of replacing the instruments. other than that, its identical to the original. You should try to find a different piano VST. it kinda sounds like you're using FL Keys, and if that is the case, you can make it sound better by adding a reeverb onto it or changing the muffle and harndess knobs. As for note-wise, you should try adding other variations into the piece that make it different from the original and more your own. But hey, the more i listen to this, the more i want to go make a remix of it myself XD haha. I'll let you know how that goes.

-DJPuresuffer

[[Happy Hardcore]Untitled (WIP)]

Totally

Branch off into EPIC-MODE

StompySan responds:

Why thank you my friend!

[SuperMario64 Menu (lol Type)]

Hey you know what?

Is this fancy? no. Does it have a high quality mastering job? no. Does it have alot of variation? no. But does a good little tune have to have lots of variation, a good mastering job and be fancy? hellz no. This song is short, simple, and just like the original, just plain awesome. You got nothing wrong with this as far as I can see :) good job!

~DJPureSuffer

P.S. I made a few SM64 mixes including a file select mix. check it out if you're bored http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/286664

davidx955 responds:

thanks dude
I'll defiantly check out your stuff
~(^-^)~

[Super Mario 64 Dire Dire Dock]

Pretty cool bro

Alright. Im gonna try to give as much constructive criticism as i can. First, as mentioned before, the flowing high hats get repetitive after a while. Try to listen to some breakbeat style music to get a feel for some nice fast paced drum loops/progressions. For the instruments, it sounds like you were trying to fit the original instruments as best as you could, which makes for a good replica, but maybe you should throw some other instruments at it to give it a even more personalized feel. Also, one of the major features of the original song was the heavy use of reeverb. In your version, your instruments all feel like they sound sharp ( not pitch wise, just how quickly they cut off ). I think that this detracts from the feel of the song. Also, it ends very abruptly without any hinting to it. It makes more of a better loop as it is right now.

Now for rating.

Uniqueness: 6 / 10
Honestly, it sounds like you could have taken a midi file of the original, threw some high hats into it, and tuned up the tempo. but thats not a bad thing, even if its not the case.

Beats: 4 / 10
Very repetative and consisting of a high hat, snare, and a very treble high kick drum.

Mastering Quality: 9 / 10
Nothing is clipping which is a very good thing. every thing is pretty much the same volume except the strings. Try to balance out what instruments you should hear more at what parts. Nice job though.

Flow: 10 / 10
Flows just as well as the original did. however, i would like to see a better ending XD

Analysis: 6 / 10
Overall in this song, I keep thinking to myself how treble high it is. Find a nice deep bass instrument to keep your rib cage pumping to the music. and also, find a good punchy bass drum and turn the volume up. thats the best way to have your fast-pace-ness stand out. So, more bass!!!

Overall: 35 / 50
8 / 10
5 / 5

Not a bad job by ANY means. However, I feel that you have plenty of room to work with and have a lot of room for improvement. So, please feel free to take any of my advice, but also, feel free to ignore it just the same. Because, in the end, all of this is just one opinion.

P.S. Congrats! you have earned the longest review that I have ever given!

-DJPureSuffer

mariogamer2010 responds:

Thanks for awesome information!
I will try too take this into effect.

Anyway thanks for all this time and effort you put into the review! You win a hunk of rewards

You earn:
4 free requests for songs by me (SM64 AND PAPER MARIO FOR THE N64!!!)
Longest review reward on mario gamer type (LRR BY MG2010) You deserve it forever!
Most positive review award (MPR BY MG2010) Again you deserve it forever!
Most honest review award (MHR BY MG2010)

[Dark Sun - Premientor]

Hmmm

You have a nice song here but you have some problems. First off, you need to download some new drum samples badly because the ones you have do not fit at alllllllll. haha. also, your guitar VST in the begining is very poor quality. It sounds like you're using the stuff in the "Packs" tab of FLStudios. Broaden your horizons. because right now your instruments are limiting you. also, try throwing on a parametric equalizer or a limiter in there cuz you need to master it a bit better. Other than this stuff, your music that you have is by no means bad. just needs some fixing up. so Nice job and good luck! :D check out my stuff if you get the time ^_^